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the dragons curse prolog

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The Dragon Curse

prolog


A girl the age of fourteen and named Iradessae  walked over to a girl of the same age and named Jessica and taped her shoulder and got her attention
"hey Jessica you know Chanty got her belly button pierced yesterday after school and its really cool" Iradessae said in a very fake cheery tone of voice
" OH COME ON! that's the tenth girl in our class!" Jessica yelled in frustration

The day went by like normal besides every one talked about Chanty's belly button piercing which was upsetting Jessica who was the only one in the class that doesn't have a belly button piercing which was going to get Jessica  and her friend Iradessae had a belly button piercing but she needed to get it redone since the whole had healed up.

Jessica got home later that day and Jessica's dad started yelling at her forsaking to get her belly button pierced
"Dad every one else has one so why can't I have one?!" Jessica yelled
"You're fourteen , you are not getting your belly button pierced!"
"Everyone else has had it done!"
"Everyone else is not my daughter!"
"But dad-"
"NO, Jessica" Jessica felt tears start to form so she spun away from her dad and ran to her room without another word said.


Jessica slammed her bedroom door shut and she instantly goes into a very dark void since her entire room had black painted walls. Jessica walked over to her bed and flopped onto the bed and got out her phone and called Iradessae who answered her phone as soon as it rang
"Jessica what is it?" Iradessae asked
"Iradessae meet me by 'flamed piercing' now I am going to be betting my belly button pierced to night and you are getting your'se repaired" Jessica said
"um… ok Jessica" Iradessae said and then she hung up and goes some clean cloths on and leaves her house and walks to 'flame piercing' and waits for Jessica who comes running over to 'flame piercing' nd waited for Jessica who comes running over to 'flame piercing'
"sorry 'm late Iradessae I hade to sneak out of my bedroom window since my dad was guarding the front door so I couldn't get out" Jessica said as she stoped
"ok ;ets go in then" Iradessae said as Jessica followed her into the building, their were different kinds of piercing all over the place but one pacific piercing ot Jessica's attention, it was a silver piercing with a gold dragon head charm dangling on it and Jessica had a strange feeling like she was ment to have it, so she picked it up and waited for the piercer to finish doing iradessae's re-piercing.

After thirty minutes had passed iradessae came out of the room she was in for thirty minutes and sat down in Jessica's place after she stud up and went into the room
iradessae was in a minute ago and she layed on the chair and let the piercer do his job but, he scared Jessica abit since he had piercing all over his face so Jessica had closed her eyes while the piercer did his job.

Once again thirty minutes had passed and Jessica came out of the room and walked home after she and iradessae left 'flamed piercing'. when she got home Jessica's dad was asleep at the kitchen table so Jessica went up stairs and stayed in her school cloths and went to bed in then and soon she fell asleep on her side since she feels comfortable on her side instead of her back or belly.
this is the prolog of my story though i count it as a chapter
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Please don't take this the wrong way, but you need an editor to help you get better. Someone who can point to a section and ask for more detail, and be able to clarify your meaning in other places. After you see your mistakes, the end result of your future stories will be much better, with or without an editor. Don't be afraid to ask people either, most great writers have editors to help them improve.

It's definitely a good story, and I congratulate you for writing it.

Before I throw myself out as a possible editor for you though, I think you should find someone better. Unfortunately, I have time constraints, which is the main reason I encourage you to find another editor. If you can't get one though, I will do it if you want, just don't expect anything to be done with any speed.